#SatSpanks Blog Hop ~ Bad Girl on the Rise
Hi, Lovely Spankazoids. Welcome to the Saturday Spankings Blog Hop. I hope you are enjoying all the warm tushies and tingly anticipation. This is my first blog hop and I am sharing an excerpt from the second novella in my Sorority Pledge Saga, Bad Girl on the Rise. (Not published yet.)
In Book 1, A Devil in Disguise, a D/s connection sparks between two inexperienced college students, Addison
and Logan, on Halloween night when she is captured after chucking
eggs at a mansion at the demand of her Sorority sisters, and he offers
her a trip over his knee for her punishment. The sub in her recognizes
the Dom in him and by the time he’s set her cheeks ablaze and made
her underwear useless, she knows she has to have him.
There’s just
one problem: even though Logan got swept up in the delicious power
exchange and tumultuous squall of passion in equal measure,
he has no intention of jumping into a lifestyle. The darkness he
knows lurks within is untested, feral and raw. But he can’t resist her
or the call of her warm flesh when she’s so eager and willing to
please him and determined to turn them into a THIS. She keeps
slipping raunchy notes into his backpack, wearing short shirts to
shake her stuff in his face and doing very, very bad things that she knows he doesn't approve of.
In this scene, Addison has sought out Logan for restitution for her misdeeds and naughty behavior, but after receiving her three punishment whacks, he told her any remaining ones would be her call until she feels guilt-free and absolved, but she can't seem to let go and forgive herself.
When he hit me again on
the other side, I squirmed and cried out a sobby, “Owww, oww.” The third and last punishment whack I took more gracefully, steeling myself to not move at all. I didn’t
even shout out, I just gritted my teeth and let out a
grunt.
Stinging slaps kept
crashing into my dripping flesh, multiplying the lingering pain
tenfold at every strike. I was shaking so hard, folded in half before him, I thought my knees would give way, but I tightened my grip on the bath bar, determined to not say “lilacs” until consciousness was close to falling away.
After seven
whacks with the bath brush, no doubt, straight from Satan’s coffers, my ass felt on
fire and ripped apart.
He lent me an exit pass again with an insistent, “Say lilacs, Addison,” as I twisted to relieve some of the sting, but I got back into position and begged for another.
When the next blast swooped into my cheeks with a deafening splat, I could no longer contain the ugly wail clawing up my throat, but so deserving of this spanking, this agony,
this hell, every bit of it for of my betrayal and disobedience, I cracked out a brittle, “More.”
Have fun collecting your Saturday Spankings!
That was very intense, Daizie. He feels he's teetering on the brink of darkness and she can't seem to say the word he wants her to, because she doesn't want it to stop. Wow! Great snippet. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting and reading. Glad you liked it.
DeleteMORE! me too - MORE!
ReplyDeletehaha. Thanks for reading. She's a spanko but also very sub-minded and upset with herself for disappointing him.
DeleteI like the safeword you've chosen - pretty, delicate & a light scent. And in that last paragraph, I expected lilacs, and what I got was more. That's nice - a good build of tension and misdirection.
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DeleteThank you, glad you liked it. This Dom is determined to be original and carve his own path.
DeleteDaizie, hi ... First time here, I think. Love your bio, especially, "Along with 27 other people in the world, I have never read 50 Shades of Grey." I'm #28, and I hate freedom crushers, too. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed the snippet.
DeleteWow, that was intense! I loved the emotions going on, great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting and taking the time to comment.
DeleteOoh, this is someone who refuses to give in! Poor girl will be bruised by the time they are done with the lesson. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteI like that he senses the darkness in him and is wary of it. Makes for "nice" internal conflict. Welcome to Saturday Spankings!
ReplyDeleteThanks. It does. His comfort level wars with his untapped desires throughout the series.
DeleteWhoa-- excellent conflict for both of them-- and not the usual variety!
ReplyDeleteThank you. Glad you liked the conflict.
DeleteVery hot and sexy. MORE!!
ReplyDeleteThank you. There's lots more. ;)
DeleteOooh. Very hot. I can’t wait to read more Daizie :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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