#SatSpanks Logan is Mesmerized by Addison's Compliance
When we left off, Logan told Addison she deserved a few whacks on her girly bits for other currently unpunished offenses. He’s never met a girl like her, and she doesn’t know it, but he’s been testing her level of submission this whole time. She keeps on complying! No matter how crazy or shameful his command may be. He’s mesmerized and driven to push her.
He’d pulled her into the hallway for a little conversation to let her choose between following him into the darkness, without even knowing what that entails, or topping her off at 800 whacks--including hundreds of lighter warm-up slaps--with his hand. She chose the former, and now she’s back in the game room in diaper position, sharing it all with Logan’s father’s poker buddies. But she’s not at all excited about getting belt slaps, especially THERE.
Here’s my snippet from Sorority Pledge 1: A Devil in Disguise:
“Logan, please,” I cried.
“This is entirely optional, Addison. You can bow out and be done, just say the word. But I think your pretty bits could use a little jolt for being so aroused during a correction? Do you? Can your conscience be free without it?”
“No ... it can’t. I’ve been dirty and deserve the punishment you see fit for me. Give me three, Sir.”
He hesitated on replying, only a wavy huff escaping his lips. Maybe he was surprised by my answer. Who in the world would choose to take pussy slaps with a belt over getting up? Me. Miss Sicko Freak Spankazoid, that’s who. “Okay. Keep your bent knees up, but reach down between your legs now and pull your outer lips apart.”
Have fun getting tingly and warm on this hop.
I never thought "pretty bits" would work for me, but does it ever! Frontal spanking is something I'm starting to find more and more interesting. . .
ReplyDeleteThank you. I don't like using the cruder words ALL the time. I'm trying to dial that down some for New Adult, but I'll probably get bumped into erotica anyway, which usually happens to spanking fiction and BDSM romance that isn't even erotica.
DeleteOh my. Asking for three in such a delicate area. You have my interest! I love your casual style and her self-depreciating mannner. Very hot.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Glad you found it hot.
DeleteMakes me tingle with dread, fascination ... yep, I need to know more.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. She's tingling with dread and fascination too.
Delete*raises hand* Yeah, I'd choose the same thing. After the first clit spank? You can't go back ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you. She's about to find that out. :)
DeleteLove her voice and her sense of humor. I think she's going to need it.
ReplyDeleteThank you. She probably will. This is her first punishment ever. And she's been liking a lot of it.
Delete"Aroused during a correction" and now the coveted "give me three" consequence... a delicious erotic romp of a snippet here today...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Joseph. Glad you liked it.
DeleteWow Daizie, that last part - I'm all bothered now! Hot hot!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Natasha. So glad you found it hot.
DeleteWowza! Your blog is aptly titled. I am now officially dark and dirty after reading that... now I have to find me something delicious. Where did my hubby go off to? BRB
ReplyDeleteHaha. You're cute. Thanks for visiting. Glad you liked the snippet.
DeleteYou certainly know how to push the envelope!
ReplyDeleteThanks.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a choice. Going into the unknown or agreeing to over 800 swats from his hand? Yikes. The man must have hands of steel. But getting a belt on the pretty bits is more than I would be able to tolerate. And being exposed like that would have me whimpering in shame. She's got a lot more guts than I have. Dark and Delicious snippet this week. Oh, and BTW, welcome to Saturday Spankings. Mistress Blake did order you to report for punishment for being late on the SatSpanks blog, but if you plead Internet trouble, she'll let you off. She sounds mean, but she's pretty reasonable about things happening that are beyond our control.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I saw my name on the board of shame. :(
DeleteOMG...I am definitely hot and tingly after that one....(unintelligible sound)...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Renee. Glad you liked it.
Deletehow fun :) she gets to choose . love the lines
ReplyDeleteThank you, Joelle. Glad you found it fun.
DeleteThat was really hot Daizie! :)
ReplyDeleteI totally love Addison - she's such a delightfully incorrigible minx lapping it all up. Hot snip
ReplyDeleteThanks so much. I'm glad you love her.
DeleteIf this woman isn't a masochist, I'm not Marie of Romania...wait...I'm NOT Marie of Romania. But she's still a masochist! :)
ReplyDeleteShe knows she's a spanko, but hasn't come to terms with her inner masochist yet. She has no clue how much pain she actually likes and is utterly surprised by her growing delight.
DeleteHer inner dialogue is a fun look into her perception of herself. It added to the excerpt and connected be to her.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Paloma. Thanks for reading.
DeleteSorry to be so late commenting, but I, too, had computer problems. Fun and unusual snippet. You're a girl after my own heart.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.
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